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Unit 5 · Lesson 6 of 6

Research, Citation, Revision and Reflection

Finding and judging sources with First Nations, Métis and Inuit authors and organizations first, citing in MLA style, citing knowledge shared orally only with permission and full attribution, then revising, editing, proofreading and reflecting on your writing.

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Key things to remember

  1. 1Start research with First Nations, Métis and Inuit authors, organizations and primary documents, then judge other sources against them.
  2. 2MLA in-text: (Surname page). Works Cited: alphabetical, double-spaced, hanging indent.
  3. 3Cite knowledge shared orally only with permission, with the person's name, nation or community, and the date.
  4. 4Knowledge you are told is not for sharing stays out of your writing entirely.
  5. 5Revise the argument, then edit sentences, then proofread the surface — largest to smallest — and reflect on your process afterward.

Research about Indigenous peoples has a long history of being done about communities rather than with them, and much of what was written from the outside was wrong or harmful. That history is why the order of your search matters. Start with what First Nations, Métis and Inuit people and organizations say about themselves, then judge every other source against that. Careful citation is part of the same respect: it shows exactly whose knowledge you are building on, and lets readers go to those voices directly.

Researching responsibly

Type of sourceExamplesWhat it is good for
National Indigenous organizationsAssembly of First Nations, Inuit Tapiriit Kanatami, Métis National Council, Native Women's Association of CanadaPositions and priorities in the organizations' own words
Nations and communitiesA First Nation's, Métis community's or Inuit organization's official websitePreferred names and spellings, history, governance and current work
Primary documentsThe TRC Calls to Action and final report; Reclaiming Power and PlaceWhat the reports actually say, rather than what others say they say
Record-keeping centresThe National Centre for Truth and ReconciliationSurvivor statements and records, shared under the Centre's own protocols
Indigenous-led media and researchAPTN, Yellowhead InstituteReporting and analysis from Indigenous journalists and researchers
Books by Indigenous authorsFiction, poetry, memoir and non-fiction written by First Nations, Métis and Inuit writersSelf-representation and the texts you analyze
Tracking projectsCBC's Beyond 94Checking the status of individual Calls to Action
Start at the top of this table and use general sources to fill gaps, not to set the frame.
  • Who wrote it, and what is their relationship to the community? A community member, an organization the community controls, and an outside observer bring different knowledge and different limits.
  • When was it written? Terms like 'Eskimo' or 'Indian' used as a general description are a strong signal of an old or outside source.
  • What is its purpose? Informing, advocating, selling, or attracting clicks each shape what gets included.
  • Does it show its evidence? Look for sources, named speakers and dates, not sweeping claims.
  • Does it generalize? A source that describes 'Indigenous beliefs' as if there were one set is less reliable than one naming a specific nation.
  • Can you confirm it laterally? Search what other credible sources — especially Indigenous-led ones — say about the claim and the author.
Red flags in a source
No author or organization named. Outdated or offensive terms used without comment. Stories described as 'legends' or 'myths' with no nation or teller credited. Spiritual practices packaged for sale. Claims to speak for all Indigenous peoples. An AI-generated summary with no traceable sources. Any one of these is a reason to find a better source, not a reason to cite this one with a warning.

Citing in MLA style

  • In the text: put the author's surname and page number in parentheses after the quotation or paraphrase — (Surname 12). If you name the author in your sentence, the parenthesis holds only the page — (12). Sources without pages need only the author.
  • On the Works Cited page: every source cited in the text appears, in alphabetical order by the first word of the entry (usually the author's surname), double-spaced, with a hanging indent — the first line at the margin and later lines indented.
  • The core elements, in order: Author. Title of source. Title of container, Other contributors, Version, Number, Publisher, Publication date, Location. Include the ones that apply and skip the rest.
  • Organizations as authors: when an organization is both the author and the publisher of a report, MLA begins the entry with the title and lists the organization as publisher.
  • Titles: italicize whole works (books, reports, websites); put shorter works inside a container (an article, a poem, a web page) in quotation marks.
  • Paraphrase needs a citation too. Putting an idea in your own words does not make it your idea.
SourceWorks Cited pattern
BookSurname, First Name. Title of Book. Publisher, Year.
Short work in a collectionSurname, First Name. "Title of Poem or Story." Title of Collection, edited by First Name Surname, Publisher, Year, pp. 10-18.
Web pageSurname, First Name, or Organization. "Title of Page." Name of Website, Day Month Year, URL.
Report by an organization that also publishes itTitle of Report. Organization, Year.
Patterns with placeholder names. Replace every placeholder with the real details of your source.

Knowledge shared orally

1Ask permissionMay I record, quoteand share this?2Record whoName, as they want it,nation or community3What and whenDate, topic, and thecontext it was shared in4ConfirmRead back the quote;check what may be shared5Cite itIn text and in your list,as personal communication6Share backGive the finished workto the knowledge keeperrelationshippattern — follow the exact format of the style guide you are usingName, Nation or community. Topic. Personal communication, date.
Fig 1Oral knowledge is cited with permission, with the person's name, nation or community, and the date it was shared.
  • Ask permission first — to use it, and to cite it. Knowledge shared by an Elder, Knowledge Keeper or community member is theirs. Ask before you record, quote or write about what they said, and respect a no.
  • Name the person, not 'an Elder'. An anonymous 'an Elder told me' treats a person's knowledge as generic. Cite their name, their nation or community, and the date it was shared — and use the name and description they ask you to use.
  • Some knowledge is not meant to be written down. Certain stories and teachings are shared only in particular settings, seasons or relationships. If you are told something is not for sharing, it does not go in your essay, cited or not.
  • Protocols differ between nations and communities. How to make a request, and what is appropriate to offer, varies. Ask the person, or the community's education or cultural office, rather than assuming one protocol applies everywhere.
  • Check your version with them. Read back the quotation or your paraphrase so the person can confirm you represented them accurately.
  • Cite it on your Works Cited page. Standard MLA treats a conversation or interview as a source, and several Canadian college and university libraries publish adapted patterns for Elders and Knowledge Keepers that add the person's nation or community.
An adapted pattern for knowledge shared orally
Surname, First Name. Nation or community. Topic of the teaching or conversation. Personal communication, Day Month Year. In the text, cite the person by surname as you would any author. Every element here exists for a reason: the name credits the person, the nation or community stops their knowledge being treated as pan-Indigenous, and the date places it in time. Use this only with their permission.

Revise, edit, proofread — then reflect

StageQuestion it asksWhat changes
RevisingDoes the argument work?Thesis, paragraph order, missing evidence, weak analysis, whole sections added or cut
EditingDoes each sentence say it clearly?Wordiness, vague words, transitions, integration of quotations, consistent present tense
ProofreadingIs the surface correct?Spelling, capitalization, punctuation, citation format, names spelled as the nation spells them
Work from the largest problems to the smallest. Proofreading a paragraph you later cut wastes the time.
  • Capitalize Indigenous, First Nations, Inuit, Métis, Elder, Knowledge Keeper and Survivor.
  • Check accents and spellings of names. Métis carries an accent on the e. Nation names often have specific spellings — Mi'kmaq is the plural noun and Mi'kmaw the singular and adjective form — so confirm each against the nation's own usage.
  • Punctuate quotations and citations correctly: closing quotation mark, then the parenthetical citation, then the period.
  • Read aloud. Your ear catches missing words, run-on sentences and awkward phrasing that your eye skips over.
  • Do one pass per problem. Check citations in one read, capitalization in another, and spelling in a third, instead of hunting for everything at once.
  • Reflect when you are done. Note which strategies helped (drafting the thesis before the introduction, reading aloud), what you would change next time, and how your understanding of the topic or your own position shifted while you wrote.

Worked examples

Reveal one step at a time and try to beat it to the next line.

Example 1
You are researching Inuit perspectives on language revitalization. Your search returns a travel blog, a general encyclopedia entry, an Inuit Tapiriit Kanatami page and a news article by an Inuk journalist. Rank and use them.
Example 2
An Elder from a nearby community spoke to your class about the meaning of a local place name, and you want to include it in your essay. Do it responsibly.
Example 3
Your draft is complete, but you have one evening. Plan the revision so the time goes where it matters most.

Where marks get lost

  • Building an essay on general websites and outside commentary, then adding one Indigenous source at the end for appearances.
  • Citing knowledge shared orally as 'an Elder said', with no name, nation or community, date, or permission.
  • Including a story or teaching the person asked not to be written down, on the grounds that it was cited properly.
  • Leaving out citations for paraphrased ideas, or putting the period before the parenthetical citation instead of after it.
  • Proofreading for commas before fixing a thesis that the body paragraphs do not actually prove.

Flashcards 7

Where to start researching Indigenous topics
MLA in-text citation
Works Cited format
MLA core elements
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Practice

1
Which source should you start with for an essay on Métis perspectives on identity?
2
How should Works Cited entries be arranged in MLA style?
3
What is the name for the MLA formatting where the first line of a Works Cited entry sits at the margin and later lines are indented?
4
An Elder shared a teaching with your class. Which is the appropriate way to use it in an essay?
5
An Elder tells you that part of a story is not meant to be written down. What should you do?
6
Order the stages of finishing a piece of writing.
  1. 1Edit sentences for clarity and precision
  2. 2Reflect on strategies, next steps and how your thinking changed
  3. 3Proofread spelling, capitalization, punctuation and citations
  4. 4Revise the thesis, structure and evidence
7
Match each revision problem to the stage that fixes it.
A topic sentence does not support the thesis
A sentence is wordy and unclear
'metis' is missing its capital and accent
You want to record what helped you draft faster
8
An organization is both the author and the publisher of a report. In MLA, how does the Works Cited entry begin?
9
Which letter in 'Métis' carries an accent?
10
Which is the most useful reflection on a finished essay?

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